Writing W2

For writing this week I had to edit three sentence from  my report and show the before and after. We also had to put it on a google drawing and write down three things what we should be doing when editing. Here's my work.

Before	Peter went to Kapiti College a state run secondary  school but dropped out at the age of 16 so that he could get a job to finance his film hobby.	Peter went big after Bad Taste in 1989 Bad taste was a sifi 1 hour and 32 minute movie. Bad Taste was made on a low budget of 11 thousand us dollars it is Jackson's first feature film.	Jackson's family bought their first TV when he was 5 years old and the world of television immediately captured his young imagination, especially a futuristic English sci-fi show called Thunderbirds 1965-66.
After	Peter went to Kapiti College, a state-run secondary school. He dropped out at the age of 16 so that he could get a job to finance his film hobby.	In 1989, Peter went big after Bad Taste. Bad taste was a sifi 1 hour and 32 minute movie.  Bad Taste was made on a low budget of 11 thousand  US dollars, it was Jackson's first feature film.	Jackson's family bought their first TV when he was 5 years old. The world of television immediately captured his young imagination, especially a futuristic English sci-fi show called Thunderbirds 1965-66.
Things to consider when editing	Make sure your sentences make sense.	Use a thesaurus and a dictionary.	Would your reader be able to understand it.